03-01-2008, 06:16 PM
03-01-2008, 09:17 PM
Togo Wrote:Read the Second chapter and found it funny when Graphite's Chia ran away from the toughest of Sloth's minionsHe was running away from before that, too,
. kagemucha Wrote:Kemito died?!?!I told you before: Kemito only got pwned, not killed. Like how Lord Sloth pwned Ice but then I had him patched up in time for the fight at the plaza.![]()
The next part of the plot is currently experiencing some delays.
03-02-2008, 03:18 AM
Shattered Rift Wrote:The next part of the plot is currently experiencing some delays.
You sound like TNT when you say that
Awesome plot though, this plot proves that IDB raters are EVIL fighting for sloth!03-02-2008, 04:19 PM
Was the fact that we're evil ever in doubt? 
I love that picture, Drallion! It would be awesome if you did each of us (but of course we realize how much work that would be and aren't expecting anything).

I love that picture, Drallion! It would be awesome if you did each of us (but of course we realize how much work that would be and aren't expecting anything).

03-02-2008, 11:43 PM
parondante Wrote:Psh, I wait until there's a delay going on until I state the obvious, and then bring you more plotty goodness the same day, and you compare me to TNT? (I really meant that to come across more jokingly than it may have sounded.)Shattered Rift Wrote:The next part of the plot is currently experiencing some delays.You sound like TNT when you say thatAwesome plot though, this plot proves that IDB raters are EVIL fighting for sloth!
And I echo Cran's sentiments: did you really think we collected all the weapons data and formed a coalition of elite battlers for the good of Neopia?
03-03-2008, 03:49 PM
Shattered Rift Wrote:parondante Wrote:Psh, I wait until there's a delay going on until I state the obvious, and then bring you more plotty goodness the same day, and you compare me to TNT? (I really meant that to come across more jokingly than it may have sounded.)Shattered Rift Wrote:The next part of the plot is currently experiencing some delays.You sound like TNT when you say thatAwesome plot though, this plot proves that IDB raters are EVIL fighting for sloth!
And I echo Cran's sentiments: did you really think we collected all the weapons data and formed a coalition of elite battlers for the good of Neopia?
*looks to both his left and right... with meepits watching his back* ...
Maybe we were naive... But it sure explains why even the meepits are scared of you.

03-05-2008, 09:10 AM
I do wonder how and when the true colours of the IDB crew will be shown.. So far, you guys seem to be on a good way to defeat Sloth 

03-05-2008, 02:14 PM
Togo Wrote:::.Hides the pieces of a robotic meepit.::Shattered Rift Wrote:*looks to both his left and right... with meepits watching his back* ...parondante Wrote:Psh, I wait until there's a delay going on until I state the obvious, and then bring you more plotty goodness the same day, and you compare me to TNT? (I really meant that to come across more jokingly than it may have sounded.)Shattered Rift Wrote:The next part of the plot is currently experiencing some delays.You sound like TNT when you say thatAwesome plot though, this plot proves that IDB raters are EVIL fighting for sloth!
And I echo Cran's sentiments: did you really think we collected all the weapons data and formed a coalition of elite battlers for the good of Neopia?
Maybe we were naive... But it sure explains why even the meepits are scared of you.
Kenjiro Wrote:I do wonder how and when the true colours of the IDB crew will be shown.. So far, you guys seem to be on a good way to defeat SlothNever underestimate the mastermind genius of Lord Sloth.
03-05-2008, 02:58 PM
Very nice, Shattered! These are very well written. I like your style, and the description is vivid. You also manage to find ways to integrate it with the actual plot.
I look forward to reading more!
I look forward to reading more!
03-05-2008, 07:03 PM
Omg, Rilian go downnnnnn.
Nice writing work.
I'd give you +rep, but I've already done so before. 
Nice writing work.
I'd give you +rep, but I've already done so before. 
03-06-2008, 09:05 AM
You killed Riilan? Way to go, but why did Sloth give stronger weapons to riilan? Maybe because there is something stronger to give those weapons (Grundo bot)? Or because Sloth is so poor that he did not have enough money to buy those weapons? 
