02-24-2008, 09:39 PM
02-24-2008, 11:03 PM
Oooh love it, love it!
K?
K?
02-25-2008, 11:07 AM
ooh the prologue is great, love it so far! *wonders who the mysterious four are* 

02-25-2008, 04:15 PM
Thank you all for the compliments.
The next part of the plot has been releaed: http://forums.finalhit.org/showthread.ph...#pid340689
lilcutedoglover Wrote:*wonders who the mysterious four are*::.Points up a few posts.::
The next part of the plot has been releaed: http://forums.finalhit.org/showthread.ph...#pid340689
02-25-2008, 05:05 PM
Poor Eyrie
Sloth's a meaniehead the greatest!
Sloth's 02-25-2008, 05:20 PM
You don't mess with Lord Sloth. Someone had to learn that the hard way. (Note that this is the only part where the plot varies from reality: in reality, none of the Raters would ever question our master's orders.)
Edit: By the way, one of my very nice, nice friends made a beautiful image of me and my eyrie for the plot, which can be found here: http://sparkbomb.com/shaft/images/Rater%...0Small.jpg
Edit: By the way, one of my very nice, nice friends made a beautiful image of me and my eyrie for the plot, which can be found here: http://sparkbomb.com/shaft/images/Rater%...0Small.jpg
02-25-2008, 08:17 PM
Shattered Rift Wrote:You don't mess with Lord Sloth. Someone had to learn that the hard way. (Note that this is the only part where the plot varies from reality: in reality, none of the Raters would ever question our master's orders.)
Edit: By the way, one of my very nice, nice friends made a beautiful image of me and my eyrie for the plot, which can be found here: http://sparkbomb.com/shaft/images/Rater%...0Small.jpg
As a side note, those who want to see a somewhat larger version can go here:
http://www.fileden.com/files/2487/IDBRat...edRift.jpg
Aaaaand, just thought I'd also note that it may become an image series, or it may not.
I do have half a mind to do the other Raters, because this all seems far too cool to pass up.
Don't expect anything right away, or anything at all however.
And maybe I should've posted in the Welcome forum first, but, this is more important.

02-26-2008, 08:20 PM
Quote:No, actually. The four "Shadow Raters" were the other four "newer" Raters who either didn't want to be in the plot by name or who didn't get back to me in time to have details given to them in this chapter (er, prologue).
Hmmm maybe I should get on that
02-26-2008, 10:07 PM
thesovereign Wrote:Especially seeing as the next chapter includes everyone getting personal screentime.Quote:No, actually. The four "Shadow Raters" were the other four "newer" Raters who either didn't want to be in the plot by name or who didn't get back to me in time to have details given to them in this chapter (er, prologue).Hmmm maybe I should get on that
03-01-2008, 12:11 PM
Read the Second chapter and found it funny when Graphite's Chia ran away from the toughest of Sloth's minions (Iwannabeafruit is also doing well in the tournament I hear, he must have those cool freeze goggles) ... No shame in that however, Riilan is a real monster.
03-01-2008, 12:37 PM
Wow that art is fantastic! I only just now saw.
Great work!
Great work!