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Ok first of all this is the first part of that other poem I wrote (broken wings) This one is from my perspective while the other was from my ex girlfriends. This is a message of hope. That even tho a great distance seperated us I would always try to help her the best I can. The invisible chains refer to distance. Of course the problem was drugs and alcohol as well as a few conflicts with her past. The way it is written generalizes it. These lyrics are pretty straight forward.

This song already has music to it. Unfortunatly the bands myspace has such an old version that its out of date. The screaming is crap, the clear vocals are worse and there is no solo. The song has gone through a lot =P Its musically different then the norm. it has an acoustic guitar with a distortion guitar helping it a little. Acoustic is rare in a metalcore screamo song

There is also a fully acoustic song of this which will be bonus on our CD. It will be all sung with no screaming and that version also sounds amazing.

Once we do our demo this summer I will post the song up on here.

Angels Don’t Deserve Hell

I hear your cries of desperate pain
Held back by this invisible chain
Wish I could meliorate all the wrong
I ask of you that you hold strong

[Chorus]
Don't be dying, don't be afraid
I'll lead you out of this dark shell
Don't give up, don't give in
Cause angels don't deserve hell
[/Chorus]

[whisper] I know you'll make it [/whisper]

This world is black, this world is cold
I’ll tell you now, you must be bold
Such rage pulsing through your veins
My support for you still remains

[Chorus]
Don't be dying, don't be afraid
I'll lead you out of this dark shell
Don't give up, don't give in
Cause angels don't deserve hell
[/Chorus]

{solo}

Repair those beautiful broken wings
Mend your anguish, face these things
Find the end of this unbearable maze
Only then will the sun fully raise

[chorus]
Don't be dying, don't be afraid
I'll lead you out of this dark shell
Don't give up, don't give in
Cause angels don't deserve hell
[/chorus]

[whisper] I know you'll make it [/whisper]

Hehe I absolutely love this piece. It is my favourite of everything you've shown me. I can just imagine the whisper parts.. gives me the happy artist chills. Hopefully one day you'll be able to link us up with a copy of the song in its complete state =)

All the metal bands I like that break down into acoustic are ALWAYS amazing, it is unbelieveable... I want to hear this

We are going into recording soon. When I get the metalcore version up I will then ask my guitarist to play and we will record a normal acoustic version. It won't be the best recording but it won't be bad because its only a guitar and vocals

Sick, cant wait... You have a myspace profile? Link me up!

http://www.myspace.com/insurrection34

The stuff on there is all crap recording. ADDH (this song) was recorded over a year ago. i couldn't scream properly and stuff. It was made much more melodic since then. The 2 other songs are also crap recordings without drumming

I actually don't like the idea of you listening the version that is up because it is so far off what we are playing now. It doesn't represent the song well :S

Haha, well I listened to Repenting This Sin, lovin the riff in there.

Nice screaming too, if I may compare to some bands I know it sounds like a sort of mix between Opeth and Alexisonfire... Very cool sound.

Canada FTW

wow 2 bands I do not like Well at least I sound like real "singers".

When a really good version of ADDH is hosted I'll warn you. This one is just wrong, almost abuse for ears No one listen to it for your own sake.

Max you're so emo


<3

Benladesh Wrote:wow 2 bands I do not like Well at least I sound like real "singers"

*looks away in shame*

I am speechless, but I won't let this get between us .

i can see how that can be read the wrong way i meant the singers of those bands are real singers and you compared me to them, meaning that I sound like real singers