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Quote:Hallucinogens, a false escape from pain.
By José Agustín Moreno
Nowadays, the psychological situation that the youth faces is unpredictable, because it is not as simple as past generations.
Nowadays, we are bombarded by different messages, messages of a sicken perfection, an unreachable status. Every day, the families are stopping to be, they are becoming just communal houses, every day, the hopes are extinguished.
Now, the anguish, the despair and the agony of the youth take us to diverse acts, like struggling for not being squished, but the ones who haven’t fight, the ones that have been already severally struck by the life, without having something to stand it, they just want a exit.
Several “exits” are know, taking as a example, releasing your pain in art, sports, or doing something constructive, but there exists some substances that produces altered mental states.
These substances are ranged from alcohol and tobacco to strong narcotics, like heroin and peyote, the last one giving another dimension of reality, giving new worlds. We will focus on these drugs.
For hallucinogens, there exists both natural and synthetic, taking as examples the mushrooms and the LSD, respectively.
The usual effects of these drugs are increasing the user’s sensibility, making him or her aware of unnoticed things; they begin to see how the things leave auras after they move, the lights usually become more beautiful, or it can be a really bad nightmare. These conditions are called trips, a good trip or a bad trip, depending on the case.
The danger with these drugs is that their effects can’t be predicted, so the user becomes more vulnerable to deadly accidents, since the awareness state that the user gains may distort the reality at such point, that the user would be immersed in another world.
The importance of creating a reliable ambient for the youth, not being careless or overprotective, will help to avoid this kind of problems, since having a sane mind, the use of easy escapes is useless.
If a young one feels like the world is going to end, give him or her support, the adolescence is an unbalanced period, and with the actual situation, is pretty easy to fall in any addiction.
I have seen this exact situation unfold; I think this issue is one that should be looked into more, because of how easily it can be avoided. I like the title of the article "
Hallucinogens, a false escape from pain."... I think that is an effective way of portraying one of the main reasons why individuals begin to pick up these addictions.
Just out of curiosity, do you have a connection with the author (Is it you, someone you know, etc?)... Just wonderin'
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It's my work, originally intended for a school project (a magazine).
The writting has no boundaries.
Ahh okay, very well written by the way. Sorry if this is too personal, but I'm curious if there was any reason as to why you chose this topic for a magazine article? You don't have to answer of course
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It was a personal choice, in the addiction field, I preffer stuying drugs, and the hallucinogen ones are pretty interesting for me, not going to be medic, by the way.
Besides, we could write about anything for it
Ahhh, I see. It is a very intriguing topic to discuss
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Quite intriguing, since no one can know what really happens inside the head of a user, even him/herself.
If you haven't turned it in yet, would you like me to edit it? The ideas are sound (which is good - ideas and content is the hard part), but there are some slight grammar errors peppered throughout the article.
Ack! It is already done, Jasmine, but I'll be thankfull if you point me which errors I have.
It will improve my english a bit, since it is not my main language
Edits are in brackets. Don't worry about there being a lot of 'corrections' - some stuff is just my personal preference, and not any hard and fast rule. I usually try to edit stuff to flow well/sound pleasing, not just have good grammar
If that annoys you, I could take out all the non-essential edits for you.
Quote:Nowadays, the psychological situation that [our] youth face[s] is unpredictable, because it is not as simple as [that of] past generations.
Nowadays [I'd suggest a different word or phrase here - 'Every waking moment', perhaps?], we are bombarded by different messages, messages of [] sicken[ing] perfection, of [] unreachable status. Every day, [] families are [ceasing] to [exist][;] they are becoming [nothing more than] communal houses[.] [E]very day, [] [children's] hopes are extinguished.
[] [T]he anguish, the despair[,] and the agony of [] youth take us to [desperate] acts[.] [We] struggl[e] [to avoid] being squished [say what is trying to squish us to end this sentence][.] [B]ut the ones who [do not] fight, the ones that have [already] been [] sever[el]y struck by [] life, [the ones] without [] some [way] to stand [the pressure] [--] they just want a exit.
Several "exits" are know[n][:] [for] example, releasing [] pain [through] art, sports, or doing something constructive[.] [B]ut there exist[] some substances that produce[] altered mental states [abrupt end to the paragraph - add something more, even if it’s just ': drugs'].
These substances [] range[] from alcohol and tobacco to strong narcotics, like heroin and peyote[.] [Some] giv[e] another dimension [to] reality, [creating] new worlds. We will focus on these drugs.
For hallucinogens, there exist[] both natural and synthetic [drugs] [--] [] examples [would be] [] mushrooms and [] LSD, respectively.
The usual effects of these drugs are [to] increase[e] the user’s sensibility, making him or her aware of unnoticed things; they begin to see how [] things leave auras after they move, [] [or how] lights [] become more beautiful[.] [O]r [these altered perceptions] can be a really bad nightmare. These conditions are called trips [--] a good trip or a bad trip, depending on the case.
The danger with these drugs is that their effects can’t be predicted, so the user becomes more vulnerable to deadly accidents, since the awareness state that the user gains may distort [] reality [to] such [a degree] that the user [is] immersed in another world.
[C]reating a [stable environment] for [] youth, not being careless or overprotective, will help to avoid th[ese] kind[s] of problems, since having a sane mind, the use of easy escapes is useless [not sure what the rest of the sentence is supposed to mean...sorry].
If a young one feels like the world is going to end, give him or her support[.] [A]dolescence is an unbalanced period, and with [such a] situation, is pretty easy to fall in[to] any addiction.
Don't worry, it helps anyways.
Thanks a lot for the editing!