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I feel like this little poem of mine must be shared.

I made it on spanish, since I live in a spanish-spoken country, besides, I'm sort of lazy to translate it by myself, so I'm using the Babel fish translation.

If you feel to share, go ahead, just include my name with it.

Spanish original

Translated to english

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Other one, but it was written in english

In the cold night,
the blood rises,
within a flash,
an innocent dies.

*dances* hooray for spanish music *dances some more to shakira*

The first poem (English version) is very nice! I like how it demonstrates how love is not all-encompassing yet relishes this aspect.

And babel fish is good lol

Wow I really like the direction that first poem is taking. It's a little unfortunate (for me) that the original is in spanish. Translation don't always have the depth and meaning that the original have. Keep writting. I like what you do =)

Cool, I like how the first poem has that parallelism in it. It reminds me of a poem we once read in Spanish class that had repetition in it too.

When I first read the second poem, I thought of Werewolf.
But it really did end in a flash, like it was over before I knew it, and I almost felt a chill after reading it.

I wrote for Werewolf purposes, in jakachuy's game

Nice to hear you liked them