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Quote:Making things happen *fade* one step at a time...

Gemma makes things happen (especially in WW) so, I tried to incorperate the dancing and something that Gemma does.
Quote:Shades come to life *fade* to spend eternity

Meh ... this is hard.

And shades refers to ghosts and the shadows in the sig.
Didn't people see this sig as more happy, and uptempo? Dunno, some of these are really pensive subtexts; I saw it as happier.
Ryguy
Benladesh
sexysilver

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Quote:Dance *fade* The immortal bond
Quote:A twirl. *fade*
A twist.*fade*
A dip. *fade*
And the enchantment commences

I tried to link the "magic" of Gemma with dancing. Whenever I see dancing, it always captivates me; hence the enchantment. Hope it works...
The Dark Swan *fade* Seduction to the rhythm of the Night...


Swan being the component of grace what every dancer wants to be compared to *is a dancer*
[Image: gemmadancesig.jpg]

Ryguy - A twirl. *fade*
A twist.*fade*
A dip. *fade*
And the enchantment commences

Pixalation - Spellingbinding steps
Seductive sways

Lord_owlstar - Shades come to life *fade* to spend eternity
Benladesh - Dance *fade* The immortal bond
Jlt1990 - Making things happen *fade* one step at a time...
treeko - Tap, Step, Shuffle, Twirl *fade* Dance
Khaled - Twirling to the tempo of life
Krycsm - The spell weaved
*Fade*
A step is taken
*Fade*
The dance begins

Blk Mage - The Pastal Playground *fades* Upon the Dance Floor
theonlysaneone - Smoky shadows *fade* dance the night away
sexysilver - The Dark Swan *fade* Seduction to the rhythm of the Night...
Forte - An endless waltz *fade* of passion
francineh - In tune n' In time...
*appears after 1 second just below it and a tch to the right*
Just twirlin' so fine...


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Judges, please pick 3 to eliminate.

Judging is due on May 31st.
I take it we're all going through? =)
francineh Wrote:I take it we're all going through? =)
Heh...they still have today, and tomorrow to judge.
[Image: gemmadancesig.jpg]

Round Note: Hmm, I always imagined the sig to be nostalgic-like. It seems people have different interpertations? Although the word "magic" is in the signature, nothing too much suggests that it's magical. So I wouldn't focus too much on that. Also, fades work well in this signature (in my opinion), although, some of you might have gone overboard.

Ryguy - A twirl. *fade*
A twist.*fade*
A dip. *fade*
And the enchantment commences

I think this subtext would have worked better as just "A twirl, a twist, a dip *fade* and the enchantment commences". First of all, it seems way too long to read and secondly, it might look better as it would even out the lenths a bit. - 7.5/10

Pixalation - Spellingbinding steps
Seductive sways

Double lined signatures are good, but I think perhaps, this round, a fade might have worked better. The alliteration is nice. The whole subtext creates a nice picture in your head. Good job. - 9/10

Lord_owlstar - Shades come to life *fade* to spend eternity
I see what you're going at here, (seeing as how it looks like the man is a shadow). But the dress is slightly blue and you can see legs. I dont think this works that well. - 7/10

Benladesh - Dance *fade* The immortal bond
This seems just a tad too drab for me. It works and everything and fits the image. Although, it doesn't quite capture the feel of the signature. I think you could've taken a step further with this subtext. - 7/10

Jlt1990 - Making things happen *fade* one step at a time...
I'm not very fond of this subtext. It has a commercial feel to it. (As in, people say it in commercials). I dont think it fits the feel of the signature very much. - 6/10

treeko - Tap, Step, Shuffle, Twirl *fade* Dance
I actually like this one. It creates a nice up-tempo feel which some people may interperate as the feel of the signature. - 8/10

Khaled - Twirling to the tempo of life
OMG ALLITERATION! Toungue But yeah, this is a nice subtext. Tempo is a good word and it refers to "Gemma" a little bit. Although, I dont like the word "Life". I think that makes the whole subtext sound a bit corny, perhaps if you had replaced it with another word, the subtext would have worked much better. - 8.5/10

Krycsm - The spell weaved
*Fade*
A step is taken
*Fade*
The dance begins

I like this subtext, it creates a nice feel and fits the theme of the signature nicely. Not much to say... - 8/10

Blk Mage - The Pastal Playground *fades* Upon the Dance Floor
I like the idea of the subtext, but I think it wasn't executed as well as it could have been. I particularily like the word "pastel". Perhaps if you went with something like "The Pastal Dance Floor - Blah blah blah" or "Blah blah blah - The Pastal Dance Floor" - 7.5/10

theonlysaneone - Smoky shadows *fade* dance the night away
Although they're not nessisarily shadows, I do like the word smoky. I wrote somewhat of the same thing for Lord_owlstar. - 7.5/10

sexysilver - The Dark Swan *fade* Seduction to the rhythm of the Night...
It'll take a second or two to realize what you're getting at, but once it clicks in your head it's kinda neat. I like this one, although I think it could have been worded a little bit better. - 8.5/10

Forte - An endless waltz *fade* of passion
It kinda looks more like a tango or whatever to me. Although it's nice that you actually -named- a dance. I'm on the fence about the fade, I'm not sure whether it would look better with or without it. - 8/10

francineh - In tune n' In time...
*appears after 1 second just below it and a tch to the right*
Just twirlin' so fine...

I dont like this one all that much. It kind of reminds me of Polka, or line dancing. It doesn't go with the feel of the signature very much, in my opinion. - 6/10

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I choose to eliminate:

Jlt1990, Francineh, Lord_Owlstar

Sorry guys. Sad
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