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That is insanly hard! I'm going to have to take my time. Really. This ain't easy :S
Could it be clearified what the text above Gemma's name says?
Does it say "The margin of..."
Either way i'll go with:
Tainted Tango (although a high chance of changing it)
*takes one look at sig*
Good luck guys

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*mumble* how am I going to rate this? :rolleyes:
EDIT: Blk, I believe it says magic, but I could be mistaken.
Quote:An endless waltz *fade* of passion
And like i said changing my text to:
The Pastal Playground *fades* Upon the Dance Floor
Tap, Step, Shuffle, Twirl *fade* Dance
changed
In tune n' In time...
*appears after 1 second just below it and a tch to the right*
Just twirlin' so fine...
Twirling to the tempo of life (ZOMG! ALLITERATION! <3)
(Note: Since Gemma is a woman, I emphasized the twirling of the woman, as opposed to the man)
Erm...I'm kind of working of the idea that the little word there is Magic.
I realize it's longer than most subtexts...but...yeah.
Quote:The spell weaved
*Fade*
A step is taken
*Fade*
The dance begins
Smoky shadows *fade* dance the night away
Quote:Spellingbinding steps
Seductive sways
Hehe, slightly offset the second line. Loads of space on this one, but lots of action too.
Dance, it's the expression of love and passion!! Don't you forget it.

Incoperating the magic of our lovely Gemma, too.
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