06-05-2006, 04:19 PM
Exams coming up, must do this fast D=.
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Round note: To me, the signature emanates anger / confusion -- the conflicting colours and swirling motion depict them.
Ryguy - Top Left:A shapeless reflection...
Middle: What do you see?
Bottom Right:...Set your imagination free
The rhyme is nice, but I'd disagree with putting text in the middle of the image--fades would probably work better. Also, I don't understand the use of 'reflection' (although it sounds nice) -- what is it reflecting? Tone is appropriate, however something that refers more to the image instead would probably work better in this case.
7.5
Pixalation - A rustic route *fade* Out of the blue
'Rustic' is a questionable word to use, and I don't exactly see a path / route in the image, although I can understand (sort of) if someone could see one in the image. However, route is too solid and not too appropriate for the confused and dreamy sig. The fade bothers me a little, although the subtext wouldn't work without it. "Out of the blue" is nice, although you can probably improve the phrasing.
7
Benladesh - *top left* The fires of my mind
*bottom right* have never been so obscure
This is okay. The left half of the sig is red and resembles fire, and towards the middle it begins to look muddled and obscure (which you have described). However, I'm not too fond of "fires of my mind", and I think the phrasing could be improved a little bit. I still think a fade would be better, to capture the dreamyness of the sig.
8
treeko - *top right* Come *bottom left* and be a Flare in my life*
Your subtext makes me see the sig as being imbalanced =/, since there is only one word on the top right, but a whole phrase on the bottom left. Flare is a little too sudden for this dreamy/muddled sig, and the colours of the sig aren't really very vibrant. You need a gentler, subtler subtext.
6
Krycsm - Tell me what you see
*Fade*
Reveal your heart to me
*Fade*
And we will be together
Ryguy and yours are actually very similar, since they both have three lines, a rhyme, and ask the reader what they see
. Your rhyme is a little weaker; however I do like the message of yours, and the fading is more appropriate.
7.5
theonlysaneone - Washed away in a river of dreams
Nice. I like how you've captured the stormy feel of the sig with elements of water (after all, it's predominantly blue), and also the muddled nature of the sig with 'dreams'. I would, however, change river to sea / ocean / etc., river makes this just a little weaker.
8
sexysilver - Drift unto a dreamy daze - Upper left hand corner
Shadows in the shade - Lower right hand corner
Hmm. First thing I notice is that your two phrases don't connect too well. It'd be better if they were in parallel structure, or had a combined meaning or something. You have a little alliteration and assonance, but it doesn't actually work too well with the sig. Also, dazes, are by definition dreamy, and shades pretty much are shadows, so your subtext's description doesn't really help with imagery. And although the right part of the sig is dark, shade makes me think of something more black or grey as opposed to blue. Something that related more to the image would have probably worked better.
7
Forte - Top left: Your soul into mine
Bottom Right: As two loves combine
I can see why you chose two separate lines instead of a fade in this one, and it works nicely. Rhyme is nicely done and quite subtle. Nicely chosen words, e.g. soul and combine, which seems to create a lingering, dreamy feeling. I can also see two parts combining in the image (which is what you described); however this also makes me feel that there is a better word for 'loves'... something that makes the two halves feel more distinct, more separate (since the 2 parts in the signature are red and blue).
8.5
francineh - Waves crashing through my mind...
Again, I like the association with water, and 'waves crashing' provides an image which the majority of people can see, and adds to the angry / confused feeling of the sig. However, I think the phrasing, as well as the words chosen, could have been more elegant and poetic. Also - crashing *through* your mind? (although it works, in or something similar would probably be better)
7
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treeko
sexysilver
sorry guys
Round note: To me, the signature emanates anger / confusion -- the conflicting colours and swirling motion depict them.
Ryguy - Top Left:A shapeless reflection...
Middle: What do you see?
Bottom Right:...Set your imagination free
The rhyme is nice, but I'd disagree with putting text in the middle of the image--fades would probably work better. Also, I don't understand the use of 'reflection' (although it sounds nice) -- what is it reflecting? Tone is appropriate, however something that refers more to the image instead would probably work better in this case.
7.5
Pixalation - A rustic route *fade* Out of the blue
'Rustic' is a questionable word to use, and I don't exactly see a path / route in the image, although I can understand (sort of) if someone could see one in the image. However, route is too solid and not too appropriate for the confused and dreamy sig. The fade bothers me a little, although the subtext wouldn't work without it. "Out of the blue" is nice, although you can probably improve the phrasing.
7
Benladesh - *top left* The fires of my mind
*bottom right* have never been so obscure
This is okay. The left half of the sig is red and resembles fire, and towards the middle it begins to look muddled and obscure (which you have described). However, I'm not too fond of "fires of my mind", and I think the phrasing could be improved a little bit. I still think a fade would be better, to capture the dreamyness of the sig.
8
treeko - *top right* Come *bottom left* and be a Flare in my life*
Your subtext makes me see the sig as being imbalanced =/, since there is only one word on the top right, but a whole phrase on the bottom left. Flare is a little too sudden for this dreamy/muddled sig, and the colours of the sig aren't really very vibrant. You need a gentler, subtler subtext.
6
Krycsm - Tell me what you see
*Fade*
Reveal your heart to me
*Fade*
And we will be together
Ryguy and yours are actually very similar, since they both have three lines, a rhyme, and ask the reader what they see
. Your rhyme is a little weaker; however I do like the message of yours, and the fading is more appropriate.7.5
theonlysaneone - Washed away in a river of dreams
Nice. I like how you've captured the stormy feel of the sig with elements of water (after all, it's predominantly blue), and also the muddled nature of the sig with 'dreams'. I would, however, change river to sea / ocean / etc., river makes this just a little weaker.
8
sexysilver - Drift unto a dreamy daze - Upper left hand corner
Shadows in the shade - Lower right hand corner
Hmm. First thing I notice is that your two phrases don't connect too well. It'd be better if they were in parallel structure, or had a combined meaning or something. You have a little alliteration and assonance, but it doesn't actually work too well with the sig. Also, dazes, are by definition dreamy, and shades pretty much are shadows, so your subtext's description doesn't really help with imagery. And although the right part of the sig is dark, shade makes me think of something more black or grey as opposed to blue. Something that related more to the image would have probably worked better.
7
Forte - Top left: Your soul into mine
Bottom Right: As two loves combine
I can see why you chose two separate lines instead of a fade in this one, and it works nicely. Rhyme is nicely done and quite subtle. Nicely chosen words, e.g. soul and combine, which seems to create a lingering, dreamy feeling. I can also see two parts combining in the image (which is what you described); however this also makes me feel that there is a better word for 'loves'... something that makes the two halves feel more distinct, more separate (since the 2 parts in the signature are red and blue).
8.5
francineh - Waves crashing through my mind...
Again, I like the association with water, and 'waves crashing' provides an image which the majority of people can see, and adds to the angry / confused feeling of the sig. However, I think the phrasing, as well as the words chosen, could have been more elegant and poetic. Also - crashing *through* your mind? (although it works, in or something similar would probably be better)
7
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treeko
sexysilver
sorry guys
