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-Chuckles- Alright, just a little fun that I had, see what you think...^^


"We're Lupes fighting for a cause,
We honour justice without a pause,
We stand up for the right to fight,
But only if it's for the light.

Brothers and sisters fighting together,
Inside we know our bonds are forever,
We will stop enemies, we make this vow,
In our way, somewhere, somehow,

So stand with pets,
Guard the doors,
We'll deal with darkness,
And old scores."


((And I'm English, so yes 'honoured' does have a 'u' in it...-Chuckles))
Spelling honor with a 'u' makes it sound more noble to me. It sounds like there should be one more stanza at the end to conclude the whole thing, but overall, nice job! Smile
-Nods lightly-

As I say, just something knocked up in a few minutes...^^

I'll think about adding another stanza perhaps. -Chuckles-

Thanks for the input...^^
Very nice (= Are you in a lupe bd guild by chance?
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